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The World's Most Glorious Run-On Sentence
Contributed by
a7x36
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Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 07:16:05 AM in AEST
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I’d rather start in the middle
and work my way diagonally through this tetrical minefield
instead of simultaneously stopping to smell the roses
and indulging in circular reasoning tactics
because just like James I’ll be drinking Irish tonight
and no one can stop me
when I’ve become in charge of ruining my own life
just as easily as I can build it into the most bland,
scientific expression of how I really feel about paying the rent
and living in my two story home in a safe neighborhood,
but instead I decided to ____ on that whole existence
and try looking at things from an angle distorted
by approximately 3.6 degrees to the northwest,
or at least that’s what this compass I got in a bowl of corn flakes told me
to do when I go camping in the disgusting cesspool
known as suburban America.
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2008-03-27 07:16:05]
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Re: The World's Most Glorious Run-On Sentence
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by angel_blue on
Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 01:45:28 AM AEST
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| hey, it works. liked it a lot! |
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Re: The World's Most Glorious Run-On Sentence
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by althea_kendry on
Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 02:38:09 AM AEST
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:D i reli like it its awesome how it totally makes sense too :)
great job
keep it up :) |
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Re: The World's Most Glorious Run-On Sentence
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by fielding88 on
Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 03:49:52 PM AEST
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| This was very interesting. Your author's note really hooked me, that idea of going against the conventional and the expected is always fun to read. Nicely done. |
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