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River wild
Contributed by
shelby
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Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 12:08:20 PM in AEST
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She walked near the rocky edge,
her heart forlorn and filled with dread.
Her tears cascading down the rocks.
Soaking her flowing dark curly locks.
A river wild formed that day.
Through the canyons it made its way
carrying all her hurt inside
where woman and nature did collide.
The legend held fast to this day.
Another young woman to the cliff did stray.
Her tears too flowed wild and free.
In this secret place wild and free.
A river wild formed that day.
Through the canyons it made its way
carrying all her hurts inside
where woman and nature did collide.
Hushed upon the willow wing
across the valleys the birds did sing.
Echo's of the hearts remain
far across yonder plain.
A river wild formed that day.
Through the canyons it made its way
carrying all her hurts inside
where woman and nature did collide.
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shelby
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2008-03-26 12:08:20]
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Re: River wild
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 12:16:28 PM AEST
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Very interesting, well written work of art.
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Re: River wild
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 12:30:13 PM AEST
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Shelby,
Thank you for the great poem to read. Quite powerful in a quiet way.
Deadwriter
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Re: River wild
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 04:32:48 PM AEST
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Michelle,
I really enjoyed this write. I can see so much of myself in my current journey of life.
Peace to you my friend.
~Shannon |
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Re: River wild
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 11:36:03 AM AEST
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A mastery way to reflect women's plight,
and Beautifully penned.
Thanks,
With lots of love and respect,
FRANCO. |
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Re: River wild
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 01:01:34 PM AEST
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this is a very intense write.. it could be taken 2 different ways.. another lovely write from you. you always write things so deep and meaningful though... always a word of wisdom within your writes
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: River wild
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by Disha on
Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 03:55:36 PM AEST
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Very nice... I think you have a depth in your writing!!
Great work |
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Re: River wild
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by Harmony on
Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 07:58:47 PM AEST
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I like the idea of woman and nature colliding :) thankyou for your comment shelby :)
Take care
Harmony :) |
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