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This love
Contributed by
BRIDGI
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 12:41:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I saw you from a distance,
I met you from afar,
The connection was almost instant,
As soon as we locked eyes,
I knew that you were the one,
The one that would end my life,
With all the love and everything i cherrished,
The connection that we has was soon to perrish,
It was to good to be ture,
We had 4 great months together,
The best of my life,
I finnaly found the love of my life,
But all the happiness had to come to an end,
And when it did,
My world came crashing down,
All the joy and happiness turned to pain,
This love was so deadly,
I needed you,
I wanted you,
I had to have you,
I couldn't go on wihtout you in my life,
You were my addiction,
And I didn't wanna quit,
So I sat alone,
Wanting and acheing for you,
Nothing could take the place of you,
I sat alone,
Full of misery,
Slowly dieing of the need for you,
This love was so great,
This love was so hard,
This love was so deadly,
This love....
Is the love....
That ended my life.
Copyright ©
BRIDGI
... [
2008-03-26 00:41:46]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: This love
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by althea_kendry on
Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 02:32:13 AM AEST
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wow great job! i reli reli RELI like this poem :D
i can TOTALLY relate to exactly wat u sed here which proly makes me like it even more
keep writin bridgette cuz ur great at it :) |
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Re: This love
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 07:04:05 PM AEST
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Easy flawless flow of words that expresses the painful emotional break-down....and well written indeed.
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FRANCO. |
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Re: This love
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by alibof10 on
Thursday, 3rd April 2008 @ 11:40:56 PM AEST
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great poem bridgette .. i love it .. ive felt the same way b4 .. i know how much this hurts ..
awesome poem... |
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