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Breathe

Contributed by SilverRain on Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 08:21:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You stand before me
your lips close to mine
as we linger before they touch

I breathe….

the smell of you flow into my depths
become part of who I am
spirals and twirls into my blood

I breathe you in…

Our souls entwined as one
your breath becomes mine
A oneness shared in one stolen moment
put aside for you and me

I breathe out

feeling you flowing through my veins
I keep part of you inside me for now
till I breath you in once again

Copyright Â© SilverRain ... [ 2008-03-25 20:21:38]
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Re: Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 08:31:04 PM AEST
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a very well expressed love in this write.. well done lovely job here

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanie on Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 10:43:50 PM AEST
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Sjoe... jy sit soveel gevoel in jou poems.. dis ongelooflik!!!

STUNING

Re: Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by alibof10 on Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 10:57:35 PM AEST
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great poem man .. good choice of words .. amazing ..

Re: Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 04:33:28 AM AEST
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Again, I can only say - amazing. You are definitely a polished writer. Good work, I think I'm learning something from you.
Thanks

Re: Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Arijadna77 on Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 09:11:10 PM AEST
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So sensitive...and somehow..peaceful...

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