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Breathe
Contributed by
SilverRain
on
Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 08:21:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You stand before me
your lips close to mine
as we linger before they touch
I breathe….
the smell of you flow into my depths
become part of who I am
spirals and twirls into my blood
I breathe you in…
Our souls entwined as one
your breath becomes mine
A oneness shared in one stolen moment
put aside for you and me
I breathe out
feeling you flowing through my veins
I keep part of you inside me for now
till I breath you in once again
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SilverRain
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2008-03-25 20:21:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Breathe
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 08:31:04 PM AEST (User
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a very well expressed love in this write.. well done lovely job here
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Breathe
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chanie on
Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 10:43:50 PM AEST (User
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Sjoe... jy sit soveel gevoel in jou poems.. dis ongelooflik!!!
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Re: Breathe
(User Rating: 1 ) by alibof10 on
Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 10:57:35 PM AEST (User
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great poem man .. good choice of words .. amazing .. |
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Re: Breathe
(User Rating: 1 ) by ZiggyB on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 04:33:28 AM AEST (User
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Again, I can only say - amazing. You are definitely a polished writer. Good work, I think I'm learning something from you.
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Re: Breathe
(User Rating: 1 ) by Arijadna77 on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 09:11:10 PM AEST (User
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So sensitive...and somehow..peaceful...
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