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Deep Love
Contributed by
Mila
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Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 03:29:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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to love is simple but to keep on loving isn't-sometimes it's too much to intake from one & another-words of pain & actions we don't want to accept-we struggle & fight against our feelings-we fall into our thoughts of confusion-emotions run wild & we loose control-somehow we find the strength to just hold on enough to overcome it-we convince ourselves its only a problem we need to face-we believe in one thing & we hold on to one explanation-we will confront this battle & we will concur it-we need to admit that once we love that special one we do so completely even when we seem at war-love is what keeps us together so if it seems hard at times it's only a test of your tolerance-love is the answer at the end to it all.
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Mila
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Re: Deep Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 09:54:43 AM AEST (User
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Oh how true this is Mila. There's a small line between love and hate. It's so easy to adore and yet berate!
You said it very nicely, there's nothing I could possibly add.........except perhaps just a small dab...........I believe your poetry could be read more easily, if you'd do it line for line. Please try it dear, it will come naturally with just alittle time.
Warm love
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