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Bloom
Contributed by
xnoybis
on
Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 09:01:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A Japaneses blossom
In an American junkyard
The perfect birthplace
for a warrior poet.
Copyright ©
xnoybis
... [
2008-03-23 21:01:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Bloom
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Monday, 24th March 2008 @ 08:18:28 PM AEST (User
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Crisp, neat in its haiku-like structure, and yes the logic is impeccable.
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