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Body
Contributed by
Wolf-Isa
on
Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 06:06:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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There's a body outside my window
Shivering in the rain
It's bleeding gems of tiny dreams
And whispering songs of winter streams
Thought this body just awoke
Soon will sleep again
Then the breath it shares
With long glitter green hairs
Will fall tacit
And night will be lonely
Under Grim's delight
Copyright ©
Wolf-Isa
... [
2008-03-23 18:06:52]
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Re: Body
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 24th March 2008 @ 03:24:41 AM AEST
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Oooh, I like this. I hope you aren't offended when I say I don't know why, though.
It has some beautiful imagery, and seems somehow magical in it's creation.
Well done.
Phil xxx
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Re: Body
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by Spike on
Monday, 24th March 2008 @ 09:07:02 PM AEST
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I agree with Phil - the first quatrain is a corker but I didn't connect with it overall. And the category didn't give me any clue either.
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Re: Body
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by catz77 on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 07:58:55 PM AEST
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I really liked this.
Good write
^_^
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