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One and Done
Contributed by
angel_blue
on
Saturday, 22nd March 2008 @ 07:43:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Till death won't let me live
And love won't let me leave
While trust is on the mend
And faith is what's perceived
How fixed the scapel led hand
How true the wound that bleeds
Arrest the tender heart
Disrupt its gentle beat
The words fall hard and quick
When uttered with no care
Your reckless apathy
My heart should have been spared
Now quiet is the soul
Heart songs no longer sung
Only a chided chant
Your mantra, One and done
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angel_blue
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2008-03-22 19:43:31]
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Re: One and Done
(User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on
Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 05:45:34 AM AEST
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| well written. love the first two lines! well done. |
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Re: One and Done
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 06:21:29 AM AEST
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Nicely written, a piece I can relate to on many levels.
Keep writing my friend.
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: One and Done
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by ZiggyB on
Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 12:55:41 PM AEST
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| I really liked this. I think the first four line are great. "Thumbs up" from me. |
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