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I am leaving, but only my body.
Contributed by
Keisha
on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:10:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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When I leave I give to you,
Everything you want me too.
When I go, don’t ask why,
There will be peace, after you cry.
When you miss me,
Remember I did not flee.
Wonderful are our precious memories.
When you’re angry because I am not there,
Please be calmer, remember I cared.
When you think I am not around,
Lift your head, I will be found.
When you wished I didn’t go,
I will be there, Just so you know.
Our love will still grow stronger each day,
When I die, I leave you my love,
In an amazing way.
I will watch you from a distance,
For you my children I will make a difference.
So when I have to leave,
Remember it's only my body.
Copyright ©
Keisha
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2008-03-21 15:10:27]
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Re: I am leaving, but only my body.
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:14:08 PM AEST
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Emotions running powerful and raw. Such a heart breaking write filled with love. I hope it is a poem in thoughts and something that is not going on in real life for you..
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Re: I am leaving, but only my body.
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:50:55 PM AEST
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| wow so good |
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Re: I am leaving, but only my body.
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by emystar on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:56:59 PM AEST
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My sentiments exactly but I'm not planning to check out any time soon.
This is very deep and show the wonders and awes of luv beyond the phycial body.
It's very moving, touching I too hope that you're not on your way.
Please p.m.
big huggs, luv, peace, joy,
emy |
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Re: I am leaving, but only my body.
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 04:11:39 PM AEST
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| brilliant write! |
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Re: I am leaving, but only my body.
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by Jazzyfizzle on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 04:24:40 PM AEST
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| beautiful emotions throughout the entire poem. great job |
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Re: I am leaving, but only my body.
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by Voice of the Silent on
Saturday, 22nd March 2008 @ 02:27:31 PM AEST
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| great write it really shows how much you care for your childern |
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Re: I am leaving, but only my body.
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by angel_blue on
Saturday, 22nd March 2008 @ 07:02:27 PM AEST
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| so touching, like a letter from beyond. |
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Re: I am leaving, but only my body.
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by ZiggyB on
Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 01:08:55 PM AEST
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| Nice write. Pure love represented. I wrote a poem about my children, titled, "I Am You." Check it out if you get a chance. Again, nice writing. |
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