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Would You
Contributed by
VonVitler
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Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 09:01:22 AM in AEST
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Angels skin so soft
So true
So innocent
But what would happen if that angel should fall
Would the skin stay soft, true, and innocent
Would it turn to scales to lies to deviance
Would I be your undoing
Would it warp and rape your inner soul
Would you be damned along with I
Would you hate, despise, and loathe
Would you rejoice in me
Would you
Would you
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Re: Would You
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by prabal77 on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 09:23:17 AM AEST
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gud one but cud be better for me,,,
keep it up |
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Re: Would You
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by Keisha on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 10:48:29 PM AEST
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Keep writting, this could be done a little better, You near to let the inner fire burn not put it out.
Peace be with you
Keisha |
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