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Our own sins

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 08:38:39 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Soulscapes and landslides
there are days when you shut down and cry
Waters run dry
crashing of emotional walls begin

no one should point any fingers
we all have our own sin

vampyress Jenni




Copyright © Phantomvampyress ... [ 2008-03-21 08:38:39]
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Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 10:29:04 AM AEST
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Jen this is so solid! Awesome job here. How true the words how true...

Michelle


Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by jenniferstein2006 on Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:54:28 PM AEST
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very good!


Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by jenniferstein2006 on Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:55:31 PM AEST
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good point

no one should point fingers at anyone for anything except them selves


Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 06:40:05 PM AEST
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Short but very powerfull and so true.
huggs,
emy


Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by Keisha on Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 10:58:23 PM AEST
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Straight to the point, good job.
Peace be with you.
Keisha


Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th March 2008 @ 01:50:12 AM AEST
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Compelling tittle, along with a most revealing meaning behind it. definately true, great write as always your style conveys . . .



Ben


Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 12:33:13 PM AEST
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Oh Jenni, I SO loved this! There are many I'd love to point in the
direction of this piece. Truly! Wisdom in a few short words, hun.
And so wonderfully expressed. Thank you for this. It's exquisite!

~Breezy


Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 05:28:51 AM AEST
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great message, excellent write:)


hugs n' love nessa


Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 10:13:04 PM AEST
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True, we all have our darkness and imperfections and we should be careful what (and who) we criticize. Nicely done.

S.


Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 03:18:12 AM AEST
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Short and powerful.. Well written..
Jenni


Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by ratty on Monday, 9th June 2008 @ 05:57:37 AM AEST
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Love the 2 closing lines........


Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 01:05:27 PM AEST
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I really like your style. Very clever and well written.
--Kevin
The lonely vagabond


Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Monday, 7th July 2008 @ 02:00:00 PM AEST
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Wow... An Awesome write!
Much enjoyed reading it!
Thanks.
~~Oceandreamer~~


Re: Our own sins (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:05:37 PM AEST
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so true, I like it's shortness though :)




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