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Are You
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
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Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 03:51:34 AM in AEST
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Why should we live in a world with so much hate and pain?
Those who are pure of soul huddling together in the darkness
Praying, hoping for mankind to realize the damage they're doing, the horror they're causing
The light is fading in this world, and the time we have left is limited before mankind destroys not only the world and itself,
But those innocents and pures that just want to live happilly
Amidst the dark suffering, those of us that have accepted the end should band together and celebrate our lives with eachother
Enjoy our last moments before the pitiful greed of mankind destroys us all
Are you going to free your soul from the chains of depression and live your life to the fullest,
Or perish with those that simply mope and wait in the showers of blood for their time?
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desolantdreamer
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2008-03-21 03:51:34]
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Re: Are You
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by prabal77 on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 05:51:05 AM AEST
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gud goin..the last line was nice....it's a question to b asked...
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Re: Are You
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by emystar on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 07:14:09 PM AEST
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Good writting.
One day at a time.
huggs,
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Re: Are You
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by Keisha on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 10:39:30 PM AEST
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This is a good write,
Keep writting.
Peace be with you.
Keisha |
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Re: Are You
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 09:39:43 PM AEST
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Why just live to the fullest? Why not try to make the time you have upon this earth better? Would it not be better to stand, and try to make a change, not only for yourself, but for everybody else also? Progress could be realize...if but one person at a time. It is not always about quantity, quality is where happiness can be found.
Good write tho'
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