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Emptiness you left
Contributed by
poetrygirl1991
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Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 01:06:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Emptiness; a long dark forbidden corner hidding away from the world.
Who am i to the world? What can be brought upon me to make this worth the struggle?
I'm not sure who i am anymore;without yourself right beside me.
No longer are we together, no longer am i strong.
A dark lonely space is all thats left inside my heart.
Can you see how torn i've been?, can you see that every glance that gazes at you, is of fear, loss,and anger.
Can you see the hatred i have bound up beneath my veins.
Strength is not a possibility, it's been taken from me.
Bury me away, with the memories slowly fading away.
The distress embeded away inside,the dismissal of the blissfulness once shared.
Moving on now, picking up on life, starting off afresh.
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2008-03-20 13:06:48]
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Re: Emptiness you left
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by Jazzyfizzle on
Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 02:42:55 PM AEST
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| good..real emotions. i liked it |
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Re: Emptiness you left
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 04:18:51 PM AEST
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| very good write |
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