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GIVE ME A CHANCE TO SAY...

Contributed by prabal77 on Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 12:33:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

lemme apologise in front of you,
lemme confess, sins i did.
coz my life is just an empty can,
with a bad broken lid.

lemme tell you the story now,
lemme tell you the things.
coz your the one who can make it rite,
who can mend broken links

i was once not the person,
what i am rite now.
love and fun all around
but then somehow;
your departure screwed my life,
it actually ruined my bliss.
then there was nothing left for me,
just a long wait and miss.

lemme tell you,how helpless i am,
lemme save my only day.
tonite i am gonna say it all,
give me a chance to say.

i miss the moments spent together
i miss your sweet smell.
coz my life without you became,
as just living in hell.
i was wrong and careless back then
you were damn rite.
mistakes from my past life
now i am paying the price.

lemme show you,my wounds and tears
lemme save my only day
tonite i am gonna show it all
give me a chance to say

i love you a lot my angel
please give me a chance.
wanna fell warmth of your breath
wanna do slow dance.
mistakes and all those stupid things
i promise i won't commit
will love you more than anyone else
i promise we won't split.

lemme hold you close and tight
lemme save my only day
tonite yeah! i've said it all
and this love will not decay...

Copyright © prabal77 ... [ 2008-03-20 00:33:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: GIVE ME A CHANCE TO SAY... (User Rating: 1 )
by althea_kendry on Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 03:17:49 AM AEST
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wow .. i reli like it :)

something like tht happened 2 me once .. but it was too late .. for u i hope tht it is not too late :)

ur a great writer so plz continue to write :D

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