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Alone
Contributed by
justanothergirl
on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 03:50:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Tears fall from her face like rain to the ground.
She hurts inside but nobody knows why.
No one notices, nobody’s around,
She can’t help it. She continues to cry.
She wipes away her tears and grabs the gun.
She puts it to her head but no one cares.
How could she live life without anyone?
Her deep dark secrets with no one she shares.
She puts her finger upon the trigger,
Knowing she will be in a better place,
Her smile continues to grow bigger,
Wishing they knew the pain behind her face.
But no one noticed and they never will
And alone all alone she remains still.
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justanothergirl
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2008-03-18 15:50:24]
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Re: Alone
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 03:55:23 PM AEST
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Very sad but I hope this is only writing.
Luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Alone
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 03:52:12 AM AEST
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| This poem bleeds with emotion and I love that. Sadly I can relate to this poem wayyyy too well. Your not alone. |
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Re: Alone
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 01:26:32 PM AEST
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| very deep and dark. It puts you in the character's shoes and really shows the pain she is suffering. keep up the good work. |
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