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Pink
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 10:37:10 AM in AEST
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Spring touch the land about the neighborhood,
sweet scents rising to the smell of hot coffee and dainty flowers.
Pretty in pink the trees dance in their gowns
blue Jays snuggled with a flowered crown.
Rain coming down, tiny crystal drops
forming and dropping off of petals soft.
Shall we dance in the rain and where our own gowns?
Pink shall ever wear and be a favorite.......
shelby
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2008-03-18 10:37:10]
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Re: Pink
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 12:13:08 PM AEST
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I like this. Very well done and such a beautiful picture to go along with it, wow!
P.S. My poems are coming I'm just waiting for someone to delete my old ones. =)
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Re: Pink
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 12:31:52 PM AEST
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It is one beautiful spontaneous poem and wonderfully crafted. spring has been an inspirational season for many a poets but few were able to master the art of give life through poetry, and you my friend has given life to the season through this Poem.
Regards,
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Re: Pink
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 03:39:17 PM AEST
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I felt the rain and could smell the freshness
in the air, as always shel, beautiful and so
vivid, your artistry is second to none, such loveliness your poetry portrays . . .
((((Michelle))))
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Re: Pink
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 03:50:08 PM AEST
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Wow Shelby,
this is beautifull. Great photo and write.
huggs, smiles, spring,
emy |
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Re: Pink
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 12:45:39 AM AEST
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Damn, Michelle!!! As if the snow here weren't bad enough, you gotta go and
post a B E A U T I F U L picture like that! (I wish spring would hurry up and get
over here! ...sniff ...)
But the piece itself. .. damn girl! Glorious descriptions set the stage for a very vivid
and spectacular feeling of warmth, beauty and contentment. Your spring looks
amazing! (you lucky girl!)
I love this one! ^_^
~Breezy
(who will live vicariously through this piece for about a month! ) |
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Re: Pink
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 01:09:05 AM AEST
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lovely, still looking for spring here have the rain but still have snow piles on ground....thank you for the touch of Spring my friend
Shari |
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