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My Life
Contributed by
ty6687
on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 05:51:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Jesus wants my life
It's only fair
He gave me His
Why don't I care
I know it's not right
He alone deserves it
But still I hide
In my dark and lonley pit
He died for my sins
What is wrong with me
He was raised again
And still I'm stubborn as can be
I must give it up
He wants it all
I can't understand
I am so very small
But that is not what matters
He knows my heart
Better that anybody
I couldn't even start
I'm sorry I haven't
So here it is
A new begining
My life is now His
Copyright ©
ty6687
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2008-03-18 05:51:22]
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Re: My Life
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by joydeep_nath on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 06:27:53 AM AEST
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| the form of the poem is good..the idea of surrender to Him is warm.. |
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Re: My Life
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 04:19:43 PM AEST
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Very beautifull.
I'm stubborn to but God made that way. Now I use it in a good way.
Great work.
All God really wants is our luv and trust.
Huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My Life
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by Jazzyfizzle on
Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 01:28:07 PM AEST
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| i love how you can feel the emotion in this poem.. great job :) |
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Re: My Life
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by Jazzyfizzle on
Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 01:28:10 PM AEST
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| i love how you can feel the emotion in this poem.. great job :) |
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