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Blending Souls
Contributed by
AngelDawning
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Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
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I see you through the morning mist
awaiting my very presence,
your gaze upon my longing eyes
burns deep into my essence
The surroundings seem to fade away
your image is all I see
our feelings of love intensify
as I reach for you and you for me
Our hands, our hearts, our bodies quiver
as our souls blend together
we know without a spoken word
our love will last forever
Copyright © AngelDawning ... [2003-03-11]
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Re: Blending Souls
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 06:53:07 PM AEST
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| This is very well written ... is a beautiful piece.... Jan |
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Re: Blending Souls
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by ktbugg on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 07:34:14 PM AEST
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| nice work... you don't write like a newbie, awesome poem :-) |
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Re: Blending Souls
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:09:32 PM AEST
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beautiful................
and big welcome too:)
your writing friend nessa |
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Re: Blending Souls
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by twinkletoes on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:36:42 PM AEST
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Thumbs up, well written. I like it a lot.
TT |
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Re: Blending Souls
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 09:13:25 PM AEST
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Whoa.... awesome write. Can't imagine you're a newbie. :)
Welcome abroad. |
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Re: Blending Souls
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 11:18:45 PM AEST
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| You did a great job,keep writing! Christina |
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Re: Blending Souls
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by AngelDawning on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 08:38:00 AM AEST
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I thank you all for your kind comments and words of encouragement.
Blessings,
Angel D. |
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Re: Blending Souls
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by riverofwords on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 07:29:42 AM AEST
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wow ....felt like it was me and you..this was written about ....(do i know you )..:)))
awesome poem
peace be your journey
terry |
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Re: Blending Souls
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by fallensilence on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 09:00:21 PM AEST
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| this is very good. you can feel all the emotion that was put into it. and oh yeah....welcome to the site! -david |
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Re: Blending Souls
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by ravenblack_phoenix on
Thursday, 10th April 2003 @ 08:11:23 PM AEST
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| Amazing, I'm not good with love poetry, but I think I know a good one when I see it. =) |
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