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Fly With Me
Contributed by
honey56
on
Monday, 17th March 2008 @ 09:36:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Spread your wings and fly
With me
Over fields and meadows
Sway
We fly so high we fly
Just fly with me my love
So sweet
Touching the fields of four
Leaf glovers
Just fly into the heaven’s
Way above clouds so
Thick
Into the abyss of heaven’s
Bliss
With hands held tight and
Flies so free
Above the moon and the
Sun
Without a care to follow
Me
Just flying into the planets
Stars
We circle the planets around
And about
As we taken flight so high and
Over above
Nothing but white thick fluffy
Clouds beneath our feet
Copyright ©
honey56
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2008-03-17 09:36:01]
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Re: Fly With Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 12:26:06 AM AEST
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honey, this was a beautiful free floating piece. You could lift souls with this.
I especially loved your descriptions. I imagined you like a dandelion seed,
caught on a beautiful, summer breeze and flying endless in the sky, littered
only by the sun and a few fluffy clouds.
The view is breathtaking ~
~Breezy
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Re: Fly With Me
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 01:14:36 AM AEST
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a light and airy write...I really like this
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Re: Fly With Me
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by Starchild7 on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 03:33:26 PM AEST
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This was just awesome i loved it really beautiful, thank you.
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