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Falling Hearts
Contributed by
shelby
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Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 02:47:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tenderness that rides falling hearts
catching their souls in silken webs
hearts bleed everything from within
pouring their love... softly spills free.
Time lost from each weary heart,
emotions stir like leaves...
rustling in tree's.
Wish for conclusion, praying you will mend..
your hands reaching outward again.
Nestle inside that lonely mind
minute to late Will I fall once more.
This giver of time, and taker of hearts
It is love is bound in your soul..
Rise" and I will try
gathering thoughts in the hush of the night.
Heal pretty baby, let go of that blue"
you are not alone...nor I...
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-03-16 14:47:40]
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Re: Falling Hearts
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 03:05:41 PM AEST
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yOU TWO ARE VERY GOOD FOR EACH OTHER.
tHIS IS BEAUTIFULL, STRONG, AND TENDER. sORRY DIDN'T MEAN TO SCREAM but my fingers forget where they wre suppose to be.
awesome work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Falling Hearts
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 04:27:37 PM AEST
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another beautiful heart felt write.. a lovely heart felt poem again from you!! eloquently written and just so passionate and full of love.. great job guys!! enchanting!!
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Falling Hearts
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th March 2008 @ 07:23:04 AM AEST
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This is just fabulous! Crow and Shelby, Shelby and Crow and wonderful poetic pair. This was emotional and gripping. And it's conclusion both solid poetry and powerful. I loved this. I would love to see the two of you work together again. Two wonderful poets coming together can sometimes be a train wreck. Different styles colliding, ideals compromised,....not in this case. Wonderful!
BRAVO!
Daniel |
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Re: Falling Hearts
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 17th March 2008 @ 09:53:57 AM AEST
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This was so beautiful..I truly loved this poem..
God Bless!! |
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Re: Falling Hearts
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by joydeep_nath on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 06:08:59 AM AEST
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| well written..heart break so well cap[tured....n do i also smell infideltiy? |
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Re: Falling Hearts
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 12:41:13 AM AEST
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Michelle, when you and Crow get together it's always a masterful
capturing of beauty. And this is far from exception! There
is such a melancholic feel to this; a kind of hopelessness that meets
hope, if you know what I mean. An introduction that begins a
journey to all the wonder and grace movement can be. And movement
of the heart is the most delicate and beautiful thing a friend could
offer. :)
Gorgeous write, both of you!
*hugs*
~Breezy
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Re: Falling Hearts
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 01:28:44 AM AEST
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My two good friends singing perfect harmony once again
Hugs
Shari |
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Re: Falling Hearts
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 12:01:00 PM AEST
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A beautiful duet of romance touched with your carefully applied artistry, weaving another masterpeice to get pelasantly,
caught up in . . .
((((Michelle))))
Ben
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