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Back To Nature
Contributed by
moforious
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Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
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no burial for me
when life slips from my shell
left naked in the woods
my final gift, be well
organic putrification
giving back to the earth
nurtients seeping out
sucked up by tree roots
yellow bile, ichors flow
decomposition of flesh
muscles begin to liquify
the symphony of death
a banquet for the flies
helping propagate their species
a feast for the beasts
as my corpse swells with gasses
let the soil drink of my juices
may rodents bellies be full
the grass now grows stronger
where once laid a fool
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2008-03-16 10:00:00]
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Re: Back To Nature
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 10:48:59 AM AEST
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Wow!!
This is some write..
God Bless |
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Re: Back To Nature
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 12:30:27 PM AEST
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Ugh! Gross subject but awesome writing.
Huggs,
emy
but only huggs while your heart is still beating.
Why not just be cremated? |
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Re: Back To Nature
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by lost_again on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 03:37:03 PM AEST
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| This tripped me out, I just had a conversation about his exact thing a week or so ago woww. Left alot to think on here. |
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Re: Back To Nature
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by Spike on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 09:02:05 PM AEST
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Unambiguous and genuine in its gift to Gaia. Nothing more unnatural than going in to the ground in an expensive box/sarcophagous/being embalmed.
Look what happens if you're found - disintered, displayed, poked and prodded, ground into powder or burnt as fuel. No thanks - my body won't tell the future anything new. Still, a cover of leaves would be nice, and I like the idea of returning to the Earth-womb...
Bury me deep beneath her skin
Let me melt into to the world within
Spike
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Re: Back To Nature
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by babeeGii on
Monday, 17th March 2008 @ 03:28:26 PM AEST
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you can write.
so detailed and just very
very, vivid. i liked it.
keep it up. |
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Re: Back To Nature
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 02:29:45 AM AEST
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| Great writing here, kind of opened my eyes in a way at how much we are all part of the bigger picture, anyway i was moved by this and have read it 2 or 3 times, the message is so powerfull i hope more people read it, ttyl man.. |
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