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Lips of wrath
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 06:59:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lips of wrath
attack us all
plotting vengence
seeping through the bloodstream
hating the person in the way
tornado wreck
broken bones
lost homes
rebuild it all
make everything aligned
take away what wrath has left behind
**vampyress Jenni*
Copyright ©
Phantomvampyress
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2008-03-16 06:59:04]
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Re: Lips of wrath
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by shelby on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 12:41:32 PM AEST
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I love how this can have many meanings and we can take from it what we will....... The ending is hopeful and strong, nicely done.
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Re: Lips of wrath
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 12:55:09 PM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written, friend.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: Lips of wrath
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 03:35:26 PM AEST
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This was brillant. The devistation of the opening leads to the hope of something better and a new start. I agree with Michelle we will take what we will from this poem because it does have various meanings and things it can be related to. Well done.
Take care
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Re: Lips of wrath
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by Spike on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 09:06:35 PM AEST
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jenni,
Nice one - a good approach to human and natural disasters, given that we can't always avoid them. However, we can cover their tracks with new beauty.
Spike |
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Re: Lips of wrath
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 07:44:48 AM AEST
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Make's one think, a strong message you have here, jenn, a peice beautiful serious writting.
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Re: Lips of wrath
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 07:35:28 PM AEST
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Good poem, Jennitude :-)
I like the way you compare what appears to be a back stabbing rumor rouser to a tornado. Cool. Aaaaand, how the person being attacked was able to get pass that and come back to happiness at the end. Least that is what I got out of it.
Nice,
Timmy
:-)
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Re: Lips of wrath
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by wheels on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 01:20:56 PM AEST
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Very excellent use of poetic conservation with an excellent use of images
Again, I like your style.
--Kevin
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Re: Lips of wrath
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 06:19:51 AM AEST
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Jenni ... this was tormenting at first, but then so beautiful
in the end. Hope, like the rays of sun, spill over the entire piece
and create a warmth that floods the heart with light.
Wonderful write, hun. Full of thought and emotion.
~Breezy
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