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mrs. sexy
Contributed by
accurate
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Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 04:29:48 AM in AEST
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it only strikes my soul
to realise you grown old
how sweet ur tales entailed
ur past experience in mouth details
i rmember your first catch
he was sittin on a ranch
smoking words like sex
and drinking undilluted relationships
it cuts my soul deep, mrs sexy
cos after all this crazy years
YOU STILL HEFTY
you show fear and tears
Even after dating the best
Iduelly acknowledege ur stage fright
But hey, ur commission is right
Money for flesh
Dont die a whore cos ur daughter might be next
Just think bfore u open up
Life is a drink maximize ur straw
Cos ur baby is watchin
Just hope she wouldnt be trait fallin
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2008-03-16 04:29:48]
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Re: mrs. sexy
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by ell_03 on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 05:05:04 AM AEST
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Re: mrs. sexy
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by shelby on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 04:06:55 PM AEST
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I liked the message behind it but the slang took away from the over all poem. It flowed well, it is just the words like cos and ur that take away from it.
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