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Porcelain.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
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Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 08:38:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You can't see
How long I've been struggling
Struggling to break free
Snap the strings right off of me
Silent cries
Can you see the sadness inside my porcelain eyes
My porcelain skin
My broken heart inside the hollow within
Prop me up, take a glance
Pull my strings and watch me dance
Then hide me away for the next few years
Watching the dust collect upon my porcelain tears
My porcelain pain
Donning a dress with a blood red stain
Breaking apart piece by piece
Hoping to sever each thread
Fighting for release
But you can't see past these strings
Past these ties
You never bothered to look into my porcelain eyes
To see a heart that is real
Emotions I can feel
And underneath these seams
Rest my porcelain dreams
Still upon a shelf I sit
Hoping for release
Gazing past the window pane
I watch the rain
Trapped inside...
My porcelain pain.
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bleedthelove
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2008-03-15 08:38:42]
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Re: Porcelain.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 03:57:20 PM AEST
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this is very sad and painful but beautifully written I love how the ending is and how you used porcelin eyes exquisite write!
rock on,
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Re: Porcelain.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 02:35:24 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. So much sadness and there are hints of anger from being looked over and neglected. It hurts when someone doesn't recognize the pain that you are going through and ignore that and look to something else. Painful and raw. Love the use of porcelain throughout the poem.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Porcelain.
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 04:06:31 PM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written. Awesome work.
huggs,
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Re: Porcelain.
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by BornReckless on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 05:29:59 AM AEST
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| This is porcelian perfection! Yee never seem to disappoint me, your my favorite poet on here. :) |
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