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Because I Understand
Contributed by
althea_kendry
on
Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 07:17:36 AM in AEST
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I take my breath, I take for you
I hurt myself, I hurt for you
My burning tears won't stop for you
I try and try but cannot do
I'd kill myself and die for you
I'd take this knife and try for you
I'll make them pay their lives for you
Because I Understand
There is nowhere to hide from you
Forever by your side I do
You don't know that I'm here for you
Never know what I can do
On the outside smile for you
On the inside mourn for you
You run and cry I'm watching you
Because I Understand
You worry me with little things
I cry for anguish that it brings
I searched for you out in the cold
Your secrets I will always hold
I am the one that's hurting you
You thought that I was helping you
But you have control of what I do
Because I Understand
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Re: Because I Understand
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 07:23:21 AM AEST
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| very interesting write. nicely done..great flow. a little hard to understand what is meant..but still not bad. |
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Re: Because I Understand
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by redwest802 on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 01:47:03 PM AEST
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good flow and meaning
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Re: Because I Understand
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 12:53:22 AM AEST
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Another good write, I liked the flow and emphasis at the close of each verse.
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Re: Because I Understand
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by alibof10 on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 08:10:56 AM AEST
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| very nicely written ... i liked the way you linked everything together |
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