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The Broken Song
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Friday, 14th March 2008 @ 07:07:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The broken song
Playing on the radio in my heart
So hurtful every time I listen to it
Bits of pieces of you
Came back to my mind
Feels like we were never apart
Remember the way you smell
Miss the way you hug me
Cried whenever I think about us
I still do care about you
The broken song
Still playing clearly in my heart
Although broken, it is mending my heart
Slowly but surely
Copyright ©
funnyface09
... [
2008-03-14 19:07:13]
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Re: The Broken Song
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by redwest802 on
Friday, 14th March 2008 @ 07:41:50 PM AEST
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| good read i liked it |
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Re: The Broken Song
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 12:22:25 AM AEST
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Nice write
God Bless |
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Re: The Broken Song
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 02:55:28 AM AEST
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"Playing on the radio in my heart"
Very creative! Very heartfelt poem. Enjoyed the read. |
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Re: The Broken Song
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 07:00:29 AM AEST
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this is a very well expressed poem.. its pretty sad too.. I espeically liked the way it flowed.. good wording choice awesome job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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