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Lost
Contributed by
ty6687
on
Friday, 14th March 2008 @ 10:17:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Plagued by this loss
It cant be undone
At the highest cost
I lose another one
Forever condemned
While I am still well
I dont want to bend
Now he is in Hell
My unwillingness to yeild
May have cost him everything
All this revealed
My weak inner being
Christ loved him so
And I did too
But Christ told me "Go"
And I said "Why dont you"
I cant lose anymore
I must play my part
I want them to soar
Ill lead them with all of my heart.
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ty6687
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2008-03-14 10:17:43]
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Re: Lost
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by ell_03 on
Friday, 14th March 2008 @ 12:10:24 PM AEST
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I like the 2nd to last stanza
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Re: Lost
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 12:29:20 AM AEST
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| Nice write |
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Re: Lost
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 08:06:27 AM AEST
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great write! There are so many of us that just, keep our eyes straight, never say a word..never speak of the truth...It's satan working against the plan...making us shy, quiet...when we should be blaten and loud.
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