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The Window
Contributed by
diba_perfect
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Friday, 14th March 2008 @ 04:46:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The solitary piece of heaven which peers through my window,
Weaves dreams of the scornful sun and the lashing rain,
And I hold on to these frame'd delusions to consider,
The eternal beauty of the world through the gaze of my window!
With reflections traversing but not afar the Alps,
You stare at a million specks nearby,
An auburn tree waiting desolately on the brilliant snow,
A tiny frame of the world in its own colourful glow!
And as you sieve through the moments that make up your life,
Stifling visions to match the contours of the edge,
You wonder what name to christen your world with,
Is it Heaven, earth or Heaven on earth?
But when the enchanted dusk paints the sky in crimson,
You strain your ears to hear the cries of those wounded hearts,
And feel the consuming insignificance of,
The eternal beauty of the world through the gaze of your window!
Unfettering yourself from the chains and borders of your own mind,
You sail away on distant voyages to uncharted places,
Ruminating on how one paints the boundaries of countries,
With this infinite image staining the window lens..
Yet unconcerned is my window of religion,
Heedless is it of nationality,
Oblivious of greed and possession,
Is the window to my own tiny world!
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diba_perfect
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2008-03-14 04:46:49]
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Re: The Window
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th March 2008 @ 01:30:15 PM AEST
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Very beautifull, powerfull write.
awesome.
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emy |
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Re: The Window
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 12:30:45 AM AEST
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| Wonderfully written |
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Re: The Window
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by joydeep_nath on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 05:59:39 AM AEST
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| well written..good work..its true that the whole universe can be perceived within the human mind...u only need a sound mind to travel far n beyond |
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Re: The Window
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 04:01:55 AM AEST
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A beautifully written and strong piece.
I really loved the last stanza. Bravo
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: The Window
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 09:18:14 AM AEST
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A very hypnotic and dreamlike quality running through this.
Reminded me of a poem I wrote , which was about the sense of calm I got from my hotel window gazing out to sea on holiday.
Your poem gave me that same contentment
Steve |
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Re: The Window
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 09:31:05 AM AEST
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| Loved this!! Quite a surreal piece. I loved the imagery in it... Jenni |
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