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Contributed by
forgotten_poet
on
Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 11:17:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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thy beauty my eyes behold lies before me
softly kills me with sweet subtlety
penetrating the very amor of my soul
the death of thy love also be my peril
my heart placedin thine gentle gentle grasp
fragile and frail and with a sudden gasp
thou pierce it with thine dagger eyes
bleed it untill only true love abides
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2008-03-13 11:17:27]
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Re: no title
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by althea_kendry on
Friday, 14th March 2008 @ 03:08:26 AM AEST
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wow i reli like this poem :) great job!!!
i can feel th emotions comin off th page |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th March 2008 @ 03:51:55 AM AEST
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This is done so sweetly and I love the antiquated style. I look forward to reading more.
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Re: no title
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by Hyacinth on
Friday, 14th March 2008 @ 10:39:25 PM AEST
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beautifully written!
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