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Free To Leave
Contributed by
althea_kendry
on
Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 06:19:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I stay happy thoughout these days
It's the thing I do to get away
From all the pain and all the tears
I don't let anyone hear
Pre:
This seems so surreal
And so I sing it out
Chorus:
The other day when you said we're through
I thought my heart would snap in two
But now I see that I can breathe
So you are free to leave
I know no matter what I do
My world's somehow a deeper blue
Now I see that I can breathe
And so you're free to leave
We shoulda talked before it was dead
But things went wrong and all you said
Was that you could no longer be with me
And that was the end of 'we'
P & C
You put me through hell and made me low
I tolerated more than you could ever know
This storey always ends the same
Me standing alone with most all the blame
It happens over and over and over again ....
P & C (x2 [second fading])
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2008-03-13 06:19:05]
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Re: Free To Leave
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 07:17:16 AM AEST
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You've got a hit here.
Awesome work.
I certainly can relate.
huggs,
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Re: Free To Leave
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by fielding88 on
Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 11:03:18 AM AEST
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| Your rhyming was quite good, some interesting rhymes are dispersed throughout, and overall I think it was a pretty solid post. Nice job. |
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