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Musings
Contributed by
Ari
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Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 03:23:00 AM in AEST
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Writing quickly to avoid frustration
Too hard on myself for sure
Underestimate the greatness inside
Each and every one of us
Describe each moment
As if it were your last
Don't move to slowly
Too hard on myself for sure
Strong emotions of want, need
But what do we want and need
Skewed, asleep, dying
Which one is which
Find the soul of your own to discover
Try hard to never underestimate
Describe the emotion
Of being too hard on yourself
As the greatest tragedy
As the greatest sorrow
Happens all the time
Copyright ©
Ari
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2008-03-13 03:23:00]
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Re: Musings
(User Rating: 1 )
by althea_kendry on
Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 07:06:06 AM AEST
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i reli liked this poem :) it well writen and i can totally understand exactly wat u mean by th things u've written
keep writin :) |
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Re: Musings
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 07:46:05 AM AEST
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Very good work.
huggs,
emy |
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