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You'll never get my soul.
Contributed by
rowzipops
on
Wednesday, 12th March 2008 @ 09:32:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You whisper me such bitter lies,
But words disguise them sweet,
You found my heart to terrorise and knocked me off my feet.
You shun me with your alibis,
Which bear no grain of truth,
You think I will not scrutinise for every lack of proof.
I'm crippled by your smothering,
I feel you bleed me dry,
But you won't see me bothering when you lie after lie
Numbness has taken over me,
I've heard your words before,
If this is all that's meant to be why do I search for more?
You feel that now you own my heart,
Because you've gained control,
But that's a body part my dear, you'll never get my soul.
Copyright ©
rowzipops
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2008-03-12 09:32:10]
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Re: You'll never get my soul.
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by broken_cookie on
Wednesday, 12th March 2008 @ 12:10:19 PM AEST
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| i absolutly love it. i know how you feel. i wish i was that eloquent. lol. great write. |
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Re: You'll never get my soul.
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th March 2008 @ 05:20:10 PM AEST
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Bravo, I give you a standing ovation for this good write.
hugg, smiles,
emy |
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Re: You'll never get my soul.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 12:04:11 AM AEST
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This is a terrific write in my opinion, very smooth transitioning. I can feel your anger and I can feel you let go. Way to rise above.
~Jess |
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Re: You'll never get my soul.
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by Obscured_Existance on
Saturday, 1st August 2009 @ 12:50:10 PM AEST
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Excellent write! Such emotion n feeling put into this . Hope all is ok now :)
Par.. |
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