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Just my luck

Contributed by PreciousKitten on Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 11:28:38 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I have done it
i have lost the bestest friend i could ever have
he loved me
when i could not love him back
i have a cold
which means that i can't touch anyone
for many days
i feel as if
jesus was mad off at me
i must be one of those people
who can anger him
quick, fast, and in a hurry
i mean
i am only human not more
how did i except that i would do
so much damage
before going to bed
this damage is so big that an earthquake can fill it up
My love, my friend, my homie
gone, i have not been myself
yet i have paid the major price
in order to stay in god ' s good grace
not everything we do is a good decision
but we all have to do that very thing in order to be happy
i have lost everything that i have ever loved, touched, and even held in my arms
i have no clue of what to do
so help me to do right in this world
please

Copyright © PreciousKitten ... [ 2008-03-11 11:28:38]
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Re: Just my luck (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 04:46:50 PM AEST
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I'm sorry that you think god is mean. God is luv and all God expect out of any of us is to luv above all else and to trust him.
See the God I serve never gets angry.
I don't do religion but I have a personal relationship with god.
You should keep writing.
god woprk.
huggs, luv, prayer,
emy

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