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dragons lair
Contributed by
emokid16
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Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 09:27:55 AM in AEST
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Where on swift wings a dragon flies
through distant and uncharted skies
over mountain crags and forests old
to guard his hoard of hidden gold
I sought him out and called his name
he answered me with a jet of flame
if you be friend,enter my lair
if you be foe,then do not dare
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Re: dragons lair
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by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 09:38:07 AM AEST
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Good first post
how did i know it would have something to do with mythology lol
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Re: dragons lair
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 01:57:44 PM AEST
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hey fantastic first post here well done, short but sweet and to the point, great imagery within the words and i loved teh last 2 lines they were perfectly fitting, gave teh sense of power about the dragon,
great writing keep it up!!!
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