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My Ribs Are Aching
Contributed by
amber_vonHorror
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Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 08:52:34 AM in AEST
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my ribs..oh how they ache against my skin
and my stomach screams for something
barely pulsing, my blood is slowing
my heart beats twice a minute.
but this is better then 1 calorie
and i feel my stomach dissappearing
as my bones eat away my skin
and when i stand to the side im nothing
im lighter then air
but not light enough!
cos this pain i feel on the outside
the knocks, the aches, the escapes
isnt nothing compared to my head
its scattered its cluttered
Water.
I'll make sure its distilled
Just incase
Is this a way to live they say?
I guess.
Because I'll be as skinny as I want someday.
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amber_vonHorror
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2008-03-11 08:52:34]
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Re: My Ribs Are Aching
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by emokid16 on
Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 11:46:14 AM AEST
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| excellent poem i have a friend that feels the same way |
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Re: My Ribs Are Aching
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 05:30:22 PM AEST
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Please gets some help. I'd rather be a little over weight than dead. Please get help
Huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: My Ribs Are Aching
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by Voice of the Silent on
Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 01:26:27 PM AEST
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I can relate because I know the same person emokid16 knows and he's right but great poem but you shouldn't care what people think of your appearance it don't matter what other people think think for yourself
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