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Face to Face
Contributed by
SilverRain
on
Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 09:31:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I stand staring
face to face with her.
Took me a long time to get here
Now I just stare
Dumbstruck by the emptiness I see in her eyes
shallowness behind her smile
heart hardened with walls all around
words dripping with ice
Surrounded by darkness
inside and out
captured by responsibility
caged by contentment
bound in chains
of lovelessness and resentment
I wipe away the tears
as it clouds the vision before me
I had to face her some time
the person I use to be
Copyright ©
SilverRain
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2008-03-10 21:31:23]
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Re: Face to Face
(User Rating: 1 )
by BRIDGI on
Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 12:48:25 AM AEST
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You have to face yourself one day...
Its good that you did...
But once you do...
Its like 'Whoa thats me?'
Sometimes it hurts..
But you have to..
Sooner or later....
I like it...
BRidgette |
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Re: Face to Face
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by Poetic_Punk on
Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 03:10:20 PM AEST
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| I love poems like this, the way the whole time your reading it you think its about something else, then one line changes the hole meaning, great poem good work |
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Re: Face to Face
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by alibof10 on
Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 06:42:00 AM AEST
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| love your poems man .. this one is very touching |
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