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Caged Feelings
Contributed by
alibof10
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Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 08:55:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm sad
I'm depressed
I'm feeling down
I'm alone
I'm suicidal
I'm confused
I'm losing my will to stay
I'd rather die than live
I look up to the sky, for answer about my life
Yet all I get is SILENCE
My confidence is leaving me on my own
No one can save me and I DO NOT want the attention
No one sees me
No one cares about me
No one loves me
No one notices me in life
I wish to die, but I can't commit suicide!
My hand is on the trigger
And I'm ready to ignite
I mite not make it tomorrow
But, is that all right?
I can't sleep
I can't eat
I'M NOT THE OLD ME!!!
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alibof10
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2008-03-10 20:55:41]
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Re: Caged Feelings
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by SilverRain on
Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 09:41:49 PM AEST
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Hey. I also write to help sort my mind, putting the feelings on paper helps me find perspective and direction. Hold on to that and write as often as you can. I know you will get there and find the real you - the improved version, strronger, more confident and loved. Sometimes we have to break down in order to build again. Thanks for sharing. Will look out for your new postings.
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Re: Caged Feelings
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by BRIDGI on
Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 12:52:59 AM AEST
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Its good that you let it out...
I like how you made it clear that your not doing it for attention...
cuz thats what most people think...
I get how you feel...
when you say
'i wanna die but comment suicide'
i know that feeling...
ive felt it before...
If you let that feeling consume you,youll never be the old you.....
best wishes...
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