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In Your Head
Contributed by
redwest802
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Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 08:37:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As dark clouds invade your mind,
Stealing any thoughts of happiness,
Replacing them with doubt.
With anger you lash out.
Refusing to be diminished by this monstrosity,
This beast inside your head.
But no matter how much you fight, you lose.
Curling into an embryonic ball, your sanity
Hides from this hideous thing,
As you’re sub-conscious compels you to action,
Swallowing small, white miracles of truth.
The pills bringing peace and tranquility to your blue mind.
Your sanity is returning from that hidden alcove it runs to and hides.
Ahhhh peace for another hour.
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redwest802
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2008-03-10 20:37:16]
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Re: In Your Head
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by SilverRain on
Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 09:33:48 PM AEST
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| wow...awesome write! Deep and disturbing! REALLY enjoyed this! You are a very talented writer! |
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Re: In Your Head
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by althea_kendry on
Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 06:39:04 AM AEST
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wow ..
tht was reli deep! great job with lettin ppl c th emotions
it was also kinda depression which makes it better in a way
overall, great job! :)
keep writing :) |
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Re: In Your Head
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by Wolf-Isa on
Friday, 14th March 2008 @ 02:43:31 PM AEST
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I really liked this. Good job.
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