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Tissue Paper Loyalties
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 07:33:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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You both mean so much to me
Just as you did before you started to date
Now you both seem to expect of me
That there should be one of you that I hate
You're mad at her for being selfish
You're mad at him for being afraid
You both expect me to choose your side
But there's something that must be said.
I love you both with all my heart,
And to see you like this tears it in two
The pain involved in a love destroyed
Is what I see when I look at you.
Copyright ©
sir_odd87
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2008-03-10 19:33:52]
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Re: Tissue Paper Loyalties
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by SilverRain on
Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 09:51:59 PM AEST
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| Would love to know how you got the this title! Not a point of view often thought of or expressed. Good write. |
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Re: Tissue Paper Loyalties
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by BRIDGI on
Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 12:55:56 AM AEST
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| i hate when that happens....when your friends expect you to choose between them...just let them know no matter what youll love them both..i think thats best for you....if they get mad...theyll get over it... |
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Re: Tissue Paper Loyalties
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 07:39:02 AM AEST
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Great title, it was the hook that drew me in to the read.
You summed up the frustration of the situation perfectly
Steve |
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