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Edges
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 04:30:32 PM in AEST
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Silence has its own misery
subjected to ones confines
blunt edges razer sharp raw and wide open.
"Once bitten" we slide down ward
escaping nothing
digging into said drawers
for salve to stave certain pain.
Beyond the suns burn
inside the twilights glisten
we wont gather once more
the star dust has dried in the sky.
Edges refined, given a name, created and recreated once again.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-03-10 16:30:32]
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Re: Edges
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by Spike on
Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 08:51:54 PM AEST
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Shellie-Shel,
Mournful, but well said. Dissolution is its own creation. Keep on truckin, honeypot.The transformation is underway.
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Re: Edges
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by SilverRain on
Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 10:01:56 PM AEST
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| an emotional piece written with gentleness and hurt that cuts deep. heartfelt piece. |
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Re: Edges
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 07:31:07 AM AEST
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No words wasted in this tapestry of art.
You continue to create magic
Steve |
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Re: Edges
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by broken_cookie on
Wednesday, 12th March 2008 @ 12:16:37 PM AEST
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| i havent been on in a while. but i checked ya out, and as always i love everything you write. |
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Re: Edges
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 10:05:36 AM AEST
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| This is a very nice poem. Great Job! |
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