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The Hum of City Sounds
Contributed by
Onslaught
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Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 10:24:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The Hum of City sounds
From the Window
They scream calling
All my Painful Memories
In my head
Like forest
These painful memories
Are the Hounds
Its Night
And I am all alone
The unknown
Dying questions
weigh the millions
Like bricks
Im buried beneath
So many pounds
The stillness
I shall never get over
Life moving
In each and all directions
Yet somehow it tings hollow
My words are breathing yet again
Alive
And they struggle to explain
Is this why we should exist
To replace hollowness with purpose
A reasonable voice
To explain away all the silence
To make it out of here
With our hope in a choice
And to give meaning here
Wherever there is never any to be found?
Whenever I am sitting here
In silence
With the hum of City sounds
Copyright ©
Onslaught
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2008-03-09 22:24:37]
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Re: The Hum of City Sounds
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 05:55:50 AM AEST
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a very powerful emotional write.. this has an excellent flow and alot of feeling.. Very excellent writing.. I enjoyed reading this. I also like the questions and answers within this. awesome job
rock on,
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Re: The Hum of City Sounds
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 07:51:38 AM AEST
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I liked the way you contrasted the noise outside with the silence inside.
Well written
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