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Silent Struggle
Contributed by
marie
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Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 05:25:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You have left me alone,
Standing
In this lost and lonely place.
I cry for your attention,
Longing,
I reach out for your love.
Hear me as a tremble,
shaking,
Watch me as I fall.
These wall are closing tighter,
Crushing
This happiness I’ve felt
Hope you’re happy as I suffer,
Dying,
Look what you have done.
Copyright ©
marie
... [
2008-03-09 17:25:53]
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Re: Silent Struggle
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 12:37:12 AM AEST
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A beautiful emotional presentation.
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Silent Struggle
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 12:37:18 AM AEST
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A beautiful emotional presentation.
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Silent Struggle
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 05:26:40 AM AEST
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Painful and raw. I can really relate to your emotions and the way that this is tearing you into pieces full of pain. Well written and expressed.
Take Care
Christina |
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