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Eyes Like the Night Dreaming...
Contributed by
doug
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Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 04:15:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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~***~
The storm came casting evening
deep into the shadows bleeding.
Eyes like the night dreaming...
Eyes of mist in swirling blue
The night so hot , so sensual
Deep , red and luscious lips
Grinning teeth. Licking , biting ,
longing for vampyric kiss
Twilight deep in bleeding shadow.
Fountains in the rain. Little
statues weep like fallen angels
Found your ecstacy in pain
I lean so carelessly. I'm waiting
dressed to kill and will my lady.
Eyes fade like flowers decaying
but have no fear my love
for soon you will live again.
~***~
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doug
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2008-03-09 16:15:10]
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Re: Eyes Like the Night Dreaming...
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by shelby on
Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 04:52:15 PM AEST
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Geez doug you did great with this, sent a chill down my spine for a second there........ I got garlic LOL
Michelle
twilight deep in bleeding sleep that rocks! |
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Re: Eyes Like the Night Dreaming...
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by True on
Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 07:05:14 AM AEST
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| excellent poem, although not quite what I was expecting. I especially like the third verse. Glad to see new work by you. |
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Re: Eyes Like the Night Dreaming...
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by FleurdeSang on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 09:04:45 PM AEST
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Oh, my little black heart is all aflutter...
A powerful beauty, with moonflesh... I love this. I love the dark images you convey, the mist-filled cemeteries, and black lace... Exquisitely vampiric. And your form is very reminiscent of Type O Negative. I really hope you make this into a song. I'll listen to it on a stormy night with eyes closed and a soft smile. Absolutely beautiful, my friend. I hope you dabble more into this soon. I miss your writings. =)
With love and black roses,
A fellow shadow in the night,
~S. |
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Re: Eyes Like the Night Dreaming...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 08:17:56 AM AEST
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doug, this was a beautifully dark piece of desire,
need and possession. You do justice to these
writes, my friend. With every word, I am
captivated against my will. lol Must be the
allure of the dark side. Completely gripping!
well done poet!
~ Breezy
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