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Venus Rising
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 12:44:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I look into your lotus eyes
and feel sensations slowly rise
as we tenderly kiss
under a starry sky
oh
love is in the air tonight,
the fires of heaven caress me
angelic voices whisper softly
you spread your wings
and I sigh
because your love gets me high.
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2008-03-08 12:44:52]
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Re: Venus Rising
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 01:17:40 PM AEST
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Dear friend, the sensitivity of love is well expressed , truly takes the reader to the hight of love..
regards,
FRANCO. |
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Re: Venus Rising
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 02:07:04 PM AEST
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| A pleasant read, I enjoyed your descriptions of the action, nice work. |
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Re: Venus Rising
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 05:00:40 PM AEST
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Sweet, senous, romantic, intocicating.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Venus Rising
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 04:07:36 PM AEST
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ohh, this is so sweet, loving and romantic! not to mention sooo beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa |
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