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Falling Down.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
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Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 04:38:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Hold me up
I'm falling down
Broken wings
Shattered crown
Misused and confused
Take my hand
Understand
I need you now
Somehow
I'm stumbling
Crumbling
I cannot speak
Knees gone weak
Without a sound
I'm about to hit the ground
Take your hands
Take your hands and hold me
Console me
Give me just one minute
One minute to breathe
To believe
That for just one second
I might be okay
Just one moment
To say
That I need you
To save me
As I'm descending
Like a puppet with no strings
An angel with broken wings
Tears in my eyes
My prayers bleeding through the skies
That you will be my saviour
That you will wrap your arms around me
Wrap them both right around me
Because I'm falling down...
I'm falling down.
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2008-03-08 04:38:21]
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Re: Falling Down.
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 12:47:10 PM AEST
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Excellent....
love the way this flows,
I feel ya on this one. |
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Re: Falling Down.
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 02:10:31 PM AEST
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| A nice write, unique flow, I found myself enjoying the themes here. |
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Re: Falling Down.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 07:43:44 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful yet sad write! lovely writing as always from you
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Falling Down.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th March 2008 @ 02:46:05 PM AEST
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Beautifully written. Beautiful flow. It is hard to get someone to help even when you are silently screaming inside for it yet for some reason the words just will not come out. So you continue to fall hoping and praying that this person will see will realize that you need help and will hear your silent cries. Well done.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Falling Down.
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by BornReckless on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 05:39:25 AM AEST
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| You are frickin awesome. How do you write like that? you are gifted. |
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Re: Falling Down.
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by ZiggyB on
Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 02:22:06 AM AEST
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FANTASTIC! I loved the flow also.
This really is unique.
Keep em comin'
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Re: Falling Down.
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by Saaaraxxx16 on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 07:49:03 AM AEST
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| beautiful. nice write =) youve got a lot of talent |
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