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The Descending Sun
Contributed by
MuhammadShanazar
on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 03:00:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Unheeded forsaken beauty,
With a faint pale deep-golden countenance,
Looks behind as if annoyed
On going through the dismal experience
Of the day, looking down beneath
Upon the hilarious, uproarious world,
Where upon the several spots
Smoky mushrooms rise,
Wrapping the Earth from all sides around
With sable murky blankets
Impeding lights;
Or of glancing at the spectrums
Of human blood, mixing into mud,
Descends consumed depressed glowering
Deciding not to come back again
Into the aching painful zones;
But the next morn re-ascends
Refreshed with washed features
Radiant, all silvery glaring,
To accomplish the assigned job
Of sweeping the scrap of blackness.
This is how the office of God goes on,
Playing hide and seek
The Dark chases the Light
And the Light defeats the Dark,
As seamen prey upon the shark.
Copyright ©
MuhammadShanazar
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2008-03-08 03:00:23]
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Re: The Descending Sun
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by shelby on
Sunday, 9th March 2008 @ 10:13:46 AM AEST
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Nice to see you once again. I love the depth of your writing you make the reader pay attention and read between the lines and the details of the work I loved the ending......
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Re: The Descending Sun
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by jantra on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 04:00:00 PM AEST
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| what can i say about this? this was wonderful. you have a tremendous talent! i look forward to reading more. |
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Re: The Descending Sun
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 03:52:17 AM AEST
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Deep write with lovely imagery....
The Dark chases the Light
And the Light defeats the Dark,
Loved these lines....
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