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The One
Contributed by
jessiebx
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Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 11:08:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You were the one,
who hurt me,
More then anyone else ,
Could ever manage.
You shattered my heart,
Made it fragile,
You caused me to weep,
Caused me pain.
You never realised,
What you ment to me,
You were my idol,
The one I looked up too.
You caused me pain,
Pain I never thought possible,
I realised one day,
What a broken heart felt like.
You thought it was ok,
To treat me this way,
You never thought twice,
Of the little girl inside.
This little girl,
Dreamed of falling in love,
She never thought,
It would end up this way.
Just tell me this,
What made you do it?
Did you ever stop and think,
Of the damage you might cause?
You uttered the words,
The three special ones,
I love you,
But did you really?
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jessiebx
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2008-03-07 11:08:27]
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Re: The One
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 11:14:52 AM AEST
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I think the main thing is to immerse yourself in the subject of your poem
If you are proud of what you write and you like the finished work, then everyone else will like it too
Nice work
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Re: The One
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by Bleedthelove on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 07:46:46 AM AEST
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| Some people are just evil. Through and through. Nice job on your poem. |
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Re: The One
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 01:26:57 PM AEST
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I like it
good job. |
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