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Crashing To A Full Stop
Contributed by
puppy_dog_Eyes
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Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 10:40:04 AM in AEST
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Without, correct punctuation sometimes, words lose their way
Sentences rush, in like a wild river with no conclusion.
Do you ? understand what I'm trying to convey !
Here, or is the structure somewhat broken
Meaning is, meaning less where, the framework doesn't fit
Appoint is no more a point if it fails to be made
This art ? of words that play, with the mind
rules, must be followed no place for abstraction;
I cannot.Stress the importance of making scents
Loose an audience in a tapestry not in a web
Unclouded in sight, perhaps an insight !
Shrouded, in confusion a journey is never made
Language is a barrier that need not be
Sculpt the proper form with the pieces that fit
Set free imagination, let it rise and soar
Not hurtle back to earth, crashing to a full stop
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Re: Crashing To A Full Stop
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by KatsMeow on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 11:58:33 AM AEST
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| Bravo! How true this is...what we say, what others hear, especially on the net, can be two totally different conversations....his side, her side, and the truth :) Keep up the good work!!! xxx |
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Re: Crashing To A Full Stop
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by shelby on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 12:13:15 PM AEST
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I loved this and the point came across exact lol.....
Michelle |
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Re: Crashing To A Full Stop
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 01:06:21 PM AEST
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| Interesting concept. i truly enjoyed this poem! |
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Re: Crashing To A Full Stop
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 01:23:52 PM AEST
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Good flow
good topic
well done. |
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Re: Crashing To A Full Stop
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by Spike on
Monday, 10th March 2008 @ 08:41:40 PM AEST
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crappy punctuation, disconnected sentences and dyslexic spelling, and a stacatto stop-start metre like granny trying to reverse park the Hillman. Excellent. Hopefully there, are, -a few..poets, listening!
Spike the pedant |
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Re: Crashing To A Full Stop
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by a7x36 on
Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 07:09:29 PM AEST
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ur concept was perfectly illustrated.
i never did think about this in the way you did, interesting
if i was OCD, reading that would've made my head explode |
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