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A place where beauty lives
Contributed by
Oceandreamer
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Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 08:18:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Through the eyes of love,
a place where beauty lives.
It’ll hold you in it’s arms,
till forever fades away.
It’s warmth…
it embraces from afar.
No ocean’s too deep,
no skies to high,
no wall can keep us apart.
Love always has a reason,
to keep you breathing …
breathing for a lifetime.
Take a walk with me,
they’ll never find us…
Come with me,
we could only loose our way.
Let’s get lost in our own world …
our world filled with love.
We’ll find our way,
even fairytale have an end.
Through the eyes of love,
a place where beauty lives.
If this isn’t perfect,
then what is love?
If this love isn’t right,
I don’t want to know right from wrong.
If this loves a crime,
I’m guilty as sin.
If this isn’t right,
then what are we feeling?
If we are not high on love,
why are we touching the ceiling?
If this isn’t real,
I choose not to wake from this dream.
If this love isn’t life,
what are we living for?
If this isn’t happiness of tomorrow,
I choose to stay in this moment with you.
If this love brings sadness and tears,
leave me to drown in this ocean of love.
If this isn’t everything,
I’d rather have nothing…
nothing at all.
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Oceandreamer
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2008-03-07 08:18:41]
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Re: A place where beauty lives
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by fielding88 on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 10:05:36 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written, emotional and expressive. I enjoyed the repetition of the word "if" throughout, it had a good effect on the overall product. Nice job. |
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Re: A place where beauty lives
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 06:46:24 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking and sweet.
Huggs,
emy |
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