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miss them also
Contributed by
spooky
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Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 09:17:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I've seen my family cry ,,
of births,deaths, even remorse
over the celebrations and events,
but the one thing that hurts the most ,
was watching them cry ,
when i was young I use to watch my mom cry,
didn't know why, but i do now,
all i wanted to do
was catch the tears for her
and say it's all right mom,
but i couldn't ,,
so i would cry also,
my mom past away 4yrs ago,
still i haven't cried,
my brothers said when it hits ,
you will know it,,
and it did,,
i miss those who left me,
i will always have them in my heart,
some times i go to call my mom,
and i realize no ones home,,
i just want to say mom I love you ,,
and i'll be alright,,
craig s. meeks
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Re: miss them also
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 11:15:34 PM AEST
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| What a touching outpouring......don't waste those feelings....write them! |
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Re: miss them also
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by joydeep_nath on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 01:18:58 AM AEST
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| hi well written..very touching..but was more like prose |
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Re: miss them also
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by poeticeyez87 on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 06:23:10 AM AEST
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love the poem so get where this is coming from, lost my mother in 04
keep writing! |
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Re: miss them also
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 03:28:14 PM AEST
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beautifully written, ive missed your poems so...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: miss them also
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by whome on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 04:19:33 PM AEST
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| Thank you, that is beautiful. It brought back so many memories, some sad but mostly good. I lost both my parents in an accident some years ago. They say that time heals, but it never does, it may lessen the pain but never heals it. |
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